A Northerly Breeze

Cherry

By luigi_pagano

Tue, 14 Jun 2011
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20 comments
 

A northerly breeze
brings a chill to the air
but a pair of lovebirds,
entwined in the twilight,
don’t care.
They bask in the heat
generated by kisses
and intimate embraces.
As the setting sun sinks
in the ocean’s expanse
it modestly blushes
at the sight of their capers
and its reddish glow
reflects in their faces.
Now darkness descends
and the zephyr blows harder.
The nip in the air
may cool the ardour
of our lustful lovers
who still have the choice
to continue their affair
in relative comfort
in bed, under covers.

© Luigi Pagano 2011

Certificate 15
Poem
Cherry ripe
Love

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
This is beautiful Luigi, Congratulations on the well deserved cherries. Jenny.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Grateful for your nice comment, Jenny. Much appreciated. Luigi x

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is delightful, Luigi. Certainly it's up there with one of my many favourites of yours. Well done on the richly deserved cherry. And now it's time for me to cover the cage, and say 'night-night', to my two lovebirds, of the feathered kind, naturally. Tina xxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Hi Tina, I hope your feathered lovebirds had a peaceful night and did not get up to mischief under covers. I am always glad to receive your approval for which I thank you. Luigi xxx PS This must be my lucky week: my poetry collection 'Reflections' was favourably reviewed in issue 19 of Gold Dust magazine. If you are interested a free PDF copy can be downloaded at http://www.lulu.com/product/ebook/gold-dust-magazine---issue-19---full-c... Cheers.

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on
What a lovely romantic piece this is, Luigi. Very nice indeed!

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
I seldom write romantic pieces, Mark, but this came easily to me and practically wrote itself. Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Submitted by oldpesky on
I think you should write more romantic pieces, luigi. This is very good indeed.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
I'll try, oldpesky. The danger of writing something cliched or banal is what holds me back. Thanks for your encouraging remark. Luigi.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Really pleased to hear that, Luigi. I still treasure my copy of 'Reflections', and often dip into it. I shall also peruse the Gold Dust link and hope that many more will do likewise. Have a good week;-) Tina xxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Bless you, Tina. Luigi xxx

 

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Luigi_pagano Really enjoyed, yes I agree write more romance, it is in you. Well deserved cherries! So pleased your news,about copy have in Reflections gold dust published issue 19 we will down load it here. You have a good twist your poems. I love Love Bird's fascinationg to watch? Someone I knew when very young, had a avery of bird's cut throats and mixtures. Used to go and see.Think continental ones. julie xx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Nice to hear from you, Julie, and many thanks for letting me know that you liked this poem and like to read romantic ones. The cherries were a nice surprise. It is true that I sometimes put twists in my writing just to give it a bit of zest. I agree that birds are fascinating to watch. Luigi xx

 

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
This is beautiful, Luigi - definitely one of my favourites of yours, too :) Many congrats on the cherries and really hope to see more romantic pieces from you soon :) Rachel xx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Rachel, you are a hard taskmaster but I'll try my best to meet your request. Thinking cap on... Luigi xx

 

Submitted by L G Meadows on
I enjoyed the story of lovers oblivious of everything but each other. Lovely imagry.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Hello L G, nice hearing from you. Glad you enjoyed this poem and thank you for letting me know. Luigi.

 

Submitted by poetic prowess on
Wow!!E-X-C-E-P-T-I-O-N-A-L!!!

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Hello and welcome, poetic prowess. I had quite forgotten this piece until your comment brought it back to life. It gives me great pleasure to hear that you found it to your taste and thank you for letting me know. Best, Luigi.

 

Submitted by poetic prowess on
My uttermost pleasure!!!