Dad
By Parson Thru
Fri, 22 Jul 2011
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Afraid he’s passed away?
Oh, thank you.
Well…
that’s ok.
You see…
we thought he might.
He wasn’t meant
to last the night.
Or so they said last time.
We waited…
but he was fine.
We hung around and watched him eat
and take, like Lazarus,
to his feet.
We talked of spring, avoided death
and willed him on
with every breath.
We looked into each other’s eyes
and smiled.
Not great at saying goodbyes.
And now you’re telling me he’s dead.
No…
surely?
Have you checked his shed?
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A beautiful little piece, I
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A beautiful little piece, I like the upbeat pace that contrasts the content, adds a layer to it.
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I've been meaning to go to
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I've been meaning to go to the Halo Bar, I'll have to once I'm back in the UK. I'm glad it went down well, wouldn't have expected otherwise!
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