Amy
By Beeme
Tue, 30 Aug 2011
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If a mirror enlarges fear,
then yours reflects your body.
And I watch your face study
imaginary imperfections.
Your fingertips nip and tuck at your skin.
But it is so distorted and does not match
the image of a stunning petite girl,
standing in front of me;
asking if that skirt makes your tummy stick out.
I would melt myself into silver
before your convictions took hold.
And the curve of your hips
wasn’t a measuring distance,
your moles digits between what is skinny and large.
I’d reach into the glassy exterior
and adjust the position of your smile,
then I’d tell you to look at a portrait
of the most beautiful girl who ever lived.
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so lovely Bee, love the idea
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
so lovely Bee, love the idea of wanting to reach into the mirror -super!
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I had to read this
I had to read this understated poem through several times over, because I wasn't paying close attention and initially missed the key elements. Sure glad I did! This is a truly wonderful poem.
I would melt myself into silver..."
That's where the magic took over and I fell totally under your spell. Beautiful thoughts and words. Much matronly wisdom here.
barryj1
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Beautiful, just beautiful.
Beautiful, just beautiful. And congratz on the cherry! Much deserved.
Savannah
Sav
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hey beee -typo 2nd line
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hey beee -typo 2nd line -than/then -editors eyes this morning!x
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delicate and polished; like
delicate and polished; like all of your poems, Beemee..
congrats on the much-deserved cherries..
cheers,
jose hernandez diaz.
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