Portrait

By Sikander

Sun, 04 Sep 2011

7 comments

on being told
"you're beautiful"

hold still
hold
you're breath

there might just be an
ugly side

just take the picture

before you slip
and say
too much

and there's nothing left
to photograph

but more
I can't write down

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sun, 2011-09-04 17:49

I really enjoyed this. Beeme xx

Permalink Submitted by Sikander on Sun, 2011-09-04 18:59

Thank you, Beeme!

Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on Sun, 2011-09-04 19:25

Well, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Enjoyed the read.

Permalink Submitted by Sikander on Sun, 2011-09-04 20:35

Thanks for reading - I'm really glad you liked it

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sun, 2011-09-04 23:34

Truly beautiful, Sikander.

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Mon, 2011-09-05 10:11

Clever, witty and well crafted :-) all the best Lena xx

Permalink Submitted by Sikander on Mon, 2011-09-05 10:53

Thank you, SSS and lechenelf, for reading - and for the lovely comments!