America
By fromagreenhill
Tue, 16 Aug 2011
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5 comments
‘Here’s my piece.’
Charlie dropped
a nickel plated,
snub nosed,
357 magnum
into my hand.
‘Bought it off
a little ol' lesbian
at my Church.’
It was heavy,
warm and oily,
as I held it
power took on
a new meaning.
The gun
was designed
for three things;
to be carried easily,
to be concealed
and to shoot people.
That was all.
15-8-11
fromagreenhill.com
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Incredible- a lot of power
Incredible- a lot of power in this simple and short piece-
;)Pia
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really enjoyed this, it
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really enjoyed this, it reminded me of Carver (hope you don't mind me saying that) :)
ddf
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You show the point of a very
You show the point of a very good title quite well here. It compliments the story, and conjures up all kinds of thoughts on its own, in reference to this extremely well written piece.
Much enjoyed :)
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