FREEDOM
By Cavalcader
Sun, 11 Sep 2011
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16 comments
Like the wings of the plane
flying in the wind
or a heart can be happy
when it sings
Much harder to type
the words I want
I can weave colours
in my head like a loom
Of images so bright
like a clown
in a pierrot suit
and angels watching over you
I'm thinking of Pinda's
poetic words I found
freedom and love
all in the billowing clouds
Maybe he is the golden sun
shining down on me
or the moon peeping
through the swaying trees
The wind whispering your name
freedom love and peace
thankyou for the poetry
you wrote for us
may you R.I.P
All commments please!
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This is so beautiful Julie.
This is so beautiful Julie. Pinda would have been proud. I love it.
Beeme xxx
k.
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Julie, like Beeme said, this
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Julie, like Beeme said, this is absolutely beautiful.
I really love the lines:-
Maybe he is the golden sun
shining down on me
or the moon peeping
through the swaying trees
I'm sure Pinda would have found this a wonderful
piece of writing.
Thankyou for the read.
Jenny. xx
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Julie - you have surpassed
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Julie - you have surpassed yourself, both in the content of this poem, and its writing. You have worked hard, and it has been more than worth it. 'Just perfect' is what I'd say;-)
Tina xx
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I loved it too, Julie...
I loved it too, Julie... beautifully expressed.
sue
TVR
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Hi Julie, I thought I'd lost
Hi Julie, I thought I'd lost you, so glad you came back. Computers, technology and the internet are infuriating, aren't they? I just don't understand any of it. Glad to know you're okay and I'll get round to reading more of yours very soon, I promise. Off to Swanage today to see BLUES FESTIVAL (music).
Anyway, really loved this poem of yours and it is very well-written. Must go, speak soon.
lots of love
sue
TVR
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Julie. This is really
Julie.
This is really lovely.
I hope all Pinda's friends get to read this.
Take care.
ScoZen
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Bless you Julie- this is
Bless you Julie- this is very nice and I am sure it would have pleased Pinda.
Good luck in the competition
;)Pia
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