Rose
By Ewan
Thu, 29 Sep 2011
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I did not water my rose yesterday,
I was digging and raking soil.
This morning, as is a flower's way,
the petals had started to spoil.
I said sweet words, as I poured out
the contents of my watering can,
but the flower shrivelled from my spout
and away the water ran.
The rose it died at almost noon,
and my heart was so heavy and sad,
I pressed the flower by the light of the moon
to remember what I had.
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Thanks for this... it can be
Thanks for this... it can be read in so many ways. I love the imagery too, very beautiful. a lovely piece of work .
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yes can see that, which its
yes can see that, which its why its so tender and etched with sorrow.
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sorry Ewan... I sound
sorry Ewan... I sound cold... I am not meaning to, its a real shame it wasn't Cherried. I would have.
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