Seasons Change

A beautiful opening Jenny and a lovely seasonal poem - well done. :-)

This is lovely, Jenny. So very colourful. My favourite stanza is the second, but they are all beautiful. Much enjoyed;-) Tina

Stunning, the line: "mesmerized as in a dream" applies to the entire piece. It reads with ease yet mesmerises the reader with wonderful imagery.

this is beautiful Jenny - well done!

Well done on the cherry JSkin. Nice and appropriate for the seasons

Hi Jennifer, many congrats on those little dangly red things. Well deserved. You're much more a poet than I/me. Hope the seasons continue to inspire you as much as today.

Loved this one Jenny and congrats with the cherry. It was so atmospheric and such a beautiful description of Autumn and especially winter. You made it sound all so romantic I almost looked forward to the snow! ha ah but you know me- oh so sad summer is passing but I am looking forward to Spring. ;)Pia

And you just get better and better, Jenny. Such lovely feelgood atmosphere in this poem. I just wanted to wrap myself up in it. sue

Really lovely. I cannot write descriptive poetry to save my life but Autumn is lovely & sort of pensive. You have captured this brilliantly. Very well deserved cherry.

A lovely wrap for the season. Congrats!

beautiful

new skinner_jennifer Well deserved cherries! All has been said, waited to9 see this posted. It is a great poem, of picturesque beauty of nature, words, excelling, like whimsical, dappled leaves and ambience. I felt as if I was there! With the Author showing me the lake. I did one poem once called "Russett Leaves". Pleased as it only back garden and fall of them etc; gorgeopus formation colour. just typed it on, think got cherry! sometimes if not studied poem do,or in a mood something gpne wrong! bingo cherry! Without altering context of the poem odd how it works out. Have good day. julie xx

new Skinner_jennifer Hi! So kind, gobsmacked get one,as it was only looking at garden. Making more observant and noticing so much now can do. Colou'rs and beauty of poems. Gee! thankyou. I have seen your poetry clim mountains too! thanks resting got cuppa.After not good news, tuesday night, kind of expected not in the way was Given pass on to me shock. Good day to-gtehr Chichester Cathedral, and art gallery. etc; shop and a lunch cheered! me up. Somone big issue I buy know,seen his great work, now been recognised, in art gallery Chicheter Pallant House great day.Bit expensive get in Tuesdasy cheaper day, but over 2o rooms plus D.J. Under all adversity he had,turning his life around, so pleased for him. Ray came and we took photos in cafe garden of Cathedral not been years, and inside bigger than remember,built on cafe restaurant. Shop expensive. You have such great way of expanding mind,now in colours and story in poems, like them all. one of photos me holding the AbcTales, pathway of flower's then I snapped one of him. beauty lovely. take care! julie xx

Hi Jen :) I hope your not to bad :) Like always simply brilliant poetry and written well. I will confess this is lost on my pallet as you can tell the way I write lol which is more for the folk like myself on the street lol no complicated Shakespeare words I can write lol; But this is perfect and you will be published soon if not already on the way!!!!! Keep Writing Keep Smiling :)))

'a sweet caress wrapped in Winter's ambience' - absolutely stunning, Jenny. Sorry I got here a little late, this is a beautiful poem and sure deserves the cherries and praise alike - very, very much enjoyed :) Rachel xx