Wishtful (I.P.)

Cherry

By Kahdai

Sat, 15 Oct 2011
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13 comments
 

Should not wistfully wish on the stars,
should not run to the edge of the water
in the steamboat wake leaving me behind
should not gaze longingly at the trains
as they chug peacfully along the tracks
even when life feels stable and secure,
should not be tempted to leave my life.

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Comments

Submitted by well-wisher on
Very interesting take on the IP, the temptations are not vices but innocent, simple pleasures. Just a person who feels stifled and wants to be free. JoHn

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I too like the philsophy behind this one, Kahdai. A good take on the I.P.;-) Tina x

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou both very much for noticing! :) K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by fatboy74 on
quite beautiful kahdai. :-)

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I agree with fatboy

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
thankyou fatboy and insertponceyfre. :) Yes! Ii got a cherry! Thankyou :D

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Beeme on
This is lovely Kahdai, so beautiful :) Beeme xx

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Submitted by Beeme on
This is lovely Kahdai, so beautiful :) Beeme xx

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Submitted by Kahdai on
Thankyou Beeme! xx K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, this was a wonderful piece of writing and one I would have related too, in my twenty's, yes I was always wishing I was somewhere else back then. Yes this was very good for the IP and congratulations on the well deserved cherries. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Well am not in my 20s! I do like that song though x K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Beautiful, Kahdai! This had a dream-like, Zen quality. Very well done on the cherries :-) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Ooh thankyou Magic!

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "