Rocket Man ( I. P. )
By skinner_jennifer
Fri, 04 Nov 2011
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As I watched that rocket in 68
it launched you man in Appolo 8,
you gave to me those diamond sparklers
encrusted with jewels just for starters,
I remember when you left me to feel
head spinning like a Catherine Wheel,
on that day we listened to Guitars
across the sea a fountain of stars,
as we kissed fire crackers all around
the aerial shells explode from ground,
and when all is said and done
the fireworks have just begun.
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Great one for the IP
Great one for the IP Jenny-It was a momentuous day when Apollo lifted off AND landed, wasn't it! Loved every line of this poem. Liked the way you transferred the emotion to a loved one, your own personal astronaut!
;)Pia
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Great take on the IP,
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Great take on the IP, Jenny;-) You took me right back to the moon landing.
Tina;-)
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fantastic Jenny, good ending
fantastic Jenny, good ending :)
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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