Denomination

By m a white

Mon, 05 Mar 2012
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Occasionally I wonder
At my dissatisfaction
Of things that are not
But so wish to be,
And things of this attraction
That so rightly are
But deem not to be-

Much better, by far,
The force of my sanction,
The things that wish not
But so sadly be,
For in my delicate position,
They that dream, by far
Greater those that be
Than of those that are-

Certificate U
In The Land Of Dreams
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by Anvar2 on
I enjoyed the flow and atmosphere of this poem. I just wasn't sure about the words 'attraction' and 'sanction', that felt a little forced for the sake of the rhyme. However, the first four lines are really interesting and hit hard.