'Narnia'...
By Silver Spun Sand
Wed, 08 Feb 2012
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Our summer-house, at the end
of the garden. I rarely go there...
these here days. But, when I do – like
last evening, the door sticks, as ever,
and there’s more panes of glass
broken than not.
Almost dark; the sunset...reflecting
in the windows, and for one split
second, thought I glimpsed you...
my mind playing tricks on me
again; in your hand, a sprig
of Ladies Slipper.
Got me to thinking of that last time
we made out in there...overlooked
by a pink-cheeked moon – wide
eyed, that later, rocked us
to sleep...like the stars;
safe in night’s deep,
dark cradle.
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Such a pleasant read,
Such a pleasant read, particularly the last stanza. I love the title and fairy tale feel that comes off as I read on. Could get lost in that memory, thanks for sharing.
Mike
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Hello SSS, Tina, Yes this
Hello SSS,
Tina,
Yes this poem does seem to give off a nice warm glow.
and "like the stars; safe in night's deep, dark cradle." is lovely and I can see why mycall likes this poem too.
Much enjoyed
Moya
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Good afternoon Tina, this
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Good afternoon Tina,
this was one of those dreamy poems that makes you
just want to ponder and meditate on memories.
By the way, I thought the title was very appropriate.
Jenny.
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Haha. Nice! I would
Permalink Submitted by mozzythefirefox on
Haha. Nice! I would appreciate it if you would give me advice for good stories and stuff. Im new and i want at least something to be cherry picked. Thx for sharing!
-Mozzy
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Btw the narnia books are
Permalink Submitted by mozzythefirefox on
Btw the narnia books are awesome. The movies are ok but not as good as the books
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