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By valiswaverider

Thu, 19 Apr 2012
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The flames which becomes dust
The dust that becomes the stars

The stars which become the human heart
The man who becomes dust

The echo of the eternal flame
The rejoining without form of everything that lives

In providence all is held without the self and within all flesh this greater part is reflected with in the mind

Certificate U
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by steve_elliott04 on
A very interesting read. It certainly gives the reader something to think about. I particularly like the second stanza. I wonder, should the first line either be 'The flames which become the dust' or 'The flame which becomes the dust'? Cheers! Steve

Submitted by Tom Brown on
Your poem is beautiful it is clean and clear. I cannot help but think of the ultimate symbolism of a wedding ring. Although I have to admit I don't quite understand the concluding sentence. I enjoy reading your work. All the best! Tom