Lost and found

By Pat D

Sat, 19 May 2012
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The computer age is all the rage
words are written on an electronic page
children log on to a social site
Parent do not have controle
the child goes out for a stroll
meeting in a local park
usualy somewhere dark
the stranger lurks awaiting his chance
leads the police a merry dance
have you seen her goes out the cry
parents have to sit and sigh
a break through comes when day light breaks
the girl is found she is with her mates

Certificate U
Poem
Drama

Comments

Submitted by misskelizabeth on
this is a great poem, i look forward to reading more of your work.

 

Submitted by scratch on
Yes I agree with mrs' . Just a couple of points if I may? Parents should be plural, delete the e from control, break through is one word. Exchange "his" for 'the' in the eight line. Thanks for sharing.