'Thinking of my Piccaninny Days'
By Rigel
Fri, 20 Jul 2012
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From the top of the piano
I glimpse him looking down
as I try, so very hard, to play
Scott Joplin the way he did.
A poor attempt, he would agree,
but I know he’d never admit it,
not in a thousand years; big softie,
as he always was.
He was young and dapper –
then; not even married. Grandpa
stands beside him at the swing.
Fifty years have flown since
and I notice how I echo the cleft
of his chin, and darkness
of his eyes...hair kind of wayward...
determined to do its own thing,
as is mine
and I muse how we two might
have been brothers, were it not
for the fact he knew much more
of time than I ever could.
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very well written. you can
very well written. you can tell you put time and purpose into the piece.
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What a thoughtful poem
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
What a thoughtful poem Rigel,
you've given a glimpse of your past,I really enjoyed reading.
Was your Father a pianist?
Jenny.
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I'm a fan of this piece.
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I'm a fan of this piece. There a sad, slow rhythm to it.
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Lovely, Rigel. Those genetic
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Lovely, Rigel. Those genetic hooks are a funny thing. I sit in my dad's chair when I visit my mum and am shocked at the mannerisms that I spot. Embarrassed almost, and have to move.
Parson Thru
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Rigel,another one to add to
Rigel,another one to add to all of your poems that I have enjoyed.
All was good but I particularly liked the fourth stanza.
Keep them coming.
Moya
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