Master Piece
By skinner_jennifer
Mon, 23 Jul 2012
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Each stroke with love
kissed moonlit bay,
though listen carefully
at water's edge,
a shipwreck's echo
of rage and fury,
whispers of
pastures new,
wave upon wave
of dappled hue,
once deep...dark,
menacing and cruel,
some unknown hands
eclipse my senses...
I loose control
the paints a mind
of their own,
as with swirling motion
we create a Master Piece.
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This is very good Jenny,
This is very good Jenny, loved the line "some unknown hands eclipse my senses"
and
"as with swirling motion we create a master Piece"
Great stuff.
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Really enjoyed this,
Permalink Submitted by steve_elliott04 on
Really enjoyed this, Jennifer. I totally agree with Jolono on the favourite lines. Your use of imagery is brilliant here. Well done!
Steve.
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