So I Write
By ItsSteveDave
Fri, 10 Aug 2012
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I need love so badly,
My god do I need it,
But no other has a love for me
That is fulfilling.
It is in the fabric of the Earth,
And undetectable quantum winds,
And places I can't grasp for.
I want my love reflected,
I want just the right words said.
Of course I ask too much,
It's my fault,
So I write.
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I think a lot of us feel
I think a lot of us feel this way Steve- you can't jump into someone's head, can you? But you are doing right in writing about it- nice poem..
;)Pia
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Steve, you certainly express
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Steve, you certainly express the feelings of so many. Well done. Richard
Richard L. Provencher
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Agree with all of the
Permalink Submitted by badgerdisco on
Agree with all of the comments here! Great poem.
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