A Summers Day

By toshmc

Mon, 20 Aug 2012
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Breathing.  Sighing.  Talking.  Laughing.
A summer breeze through the still bare trees.
Breathing.
Napping in the sun on a crowded green.
Sighing.
Kisses and hugs among nibbles and mugs.
Talking.
Throwing and kicking and missing a ball.
Laughing.

Hoping.  Wishing.  Holding.  Dreaming.
Watching from a distance while sitting in the centre.
Hoping.
Knowing that this day was unique in every way.
Wishing.
Photographs.  A video.  Building memories.
Holding.
The first fun of the summer still to come.
Dreaming.

Dancing.  Hugging.  Kissing.  Sleeping.
The hold all wrong, to laughs instead of song.
Dancing.
Two arms, two souls, two hearts, connected.
Hugging.
They meet, they stay, meant to be this way.
Kissing.  Sleeping.

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
I really like the format of this, it's different. I also like that there is no line of description before the final sleeping. A really clever and interesting poem.

 

Submitted by Jessiibear on
Wow, I love this poem! And I agree with Sooz in every way. I especially like the lines: Dancing. Two arms, two souls, two hearts, connected. Hugging. They meet, they stay, meant to be this way. Kissing. Sleeping. Keep at it, and welcome to abctales. :)

Jess