Autumn Blues
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 01 Sep 2012
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Much fabled, sweet
bird of youth,
when did you fly away
desert my withered garden?
Desolate hangs the willow;
sheds its yellowed leaves
as the wind blows puff-ball seeds
in through my window...
to float on stale and stagnant air
along the chipped and wormy wainscot
to lodge behind the rocking chair
that mocks me with its stillness.
Shall I glimpse you again, sitting
on some distant tree where verdant
grows the celandine; or are you gone
to warmer climes, where frost
won’t coat the dustbin lids
or the Monday morning
washing-lines?
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Nicely put Tina. There's a
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Nicely put Tina. There's a chill in the breeze and the rain's stopped. Ominous.
Parson Thru
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hi Tina, you just keep on
hi Tina, you just keep on getting better and better. I think this one is nearly done!
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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This was such a thoughtful
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This was such a thoughtful poem, with a touch of
wonder at what would become of the passing season
and where life will lead nature's own.
Isn't Mother Nature wonderful? like this poem.
Nice one Tina.
Jenny.
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Do you slightly enjoy slight
Do you slightly enjoy slight melancholia blues at the departure of summer? will it soon develop into celebration of autumn gold? I liked,
'Desolate hangs the willow;
sheds its yellowed leaves
as the wind blows puff-ball seeds
in through my window...
to float on stale and stagnant air
along the chipped and wormy wainscot'
Rhiannon
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