The mornin' after the nite before ..

Cherry

By denni1

Thu, 30 Aug 2012
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No, ma friend,
Am no comin' oot.
Bin savin' up ma money for a frock ..

A ken how it'll end.
Taxis, bevvy ana club.
Then al no make ma work, lose ma bag or summat worse!

Can you no take the hint
that am feelin' a bit skint!?

So, you gals, enjoy yer boozy night
And, if you can, please keep yer legs shut tight !!

Aye, right xx

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Comments

Submitted by denni1 on
You kiddin me ?! What a bloomin honour. Big fat kiss xx

Submitted by geegogs1 on
Love it. Well deserved cherries x x

Submitted by ScoZen on
"...bevvy ana club..." fish & chips later to end the night.
ScoZen

Submitted by denni1 on
Three-to-the-left, four-to-the-right. Pickin yer way hame in the near, day light. Fumble fur yer keys, droppin aw yer stuff. Never goin oot again, enuff is enuff xx

Submitted by denni1 on
Bin there, done that xx hope you get yourself sorted in your new place xx

Submitted by karl_wiggins on
Love it. It's extremely hard to write dialect, and you appear to have accomplished this so effortlessly. The self-deprecation here is superb. Well done.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
A million per cent thank you xx Denise ..