Bless you ..

By denni1

Thu, 06 Sep 2012
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I thought we were invincible,
My care would cure your ailments.
However bad
Your head is now.
I stayed beside you,
Stupid cow.

Apparently, l am too needy.
I do agree, but love is greedy.

To crave a man who ain't aw there.
Has done such damage, caused despair.
I'll back-off, leave things well alone.
Fingers crossed, he'll text or phone ..

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Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Liked this Den, in fact I wanted a bit more of it. Apparently, l am too needy. I do agree, but love is greedy. Great lines.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Aw, how very kind of you .. l have written a great deal about my 'relationship' with someone who has PTSD. I thought if l hung around, my love would seep through and keep him alive. But, l just pissed him off the kinder l was to him. It's heartbreaking, but for the best. Cheers pal xx you lot are amazing xx

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new denni1 Enjoyed this,at least have explained well. Which is hard to do can be. Never give up hope! Write more! Sad of course,but we have face,many bridges in life! as we come to them,sort out if can. julie xx

Submitted by denni1 on
Troo .. thanks for encouragement. Lots love xx