CHERRY PICKED

Cherry

By misskelizabeth

Tue, 26 Jun 2012
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15 comments
 

what does it take
do I have to be fake?
i've tried my hardest in taking part
but I guess the words dont suit his heart
being cherry picked is harder then I thought
does the reader have to be bought
ive written with my madest imagination
its like a puzzle peices creation
this is my twenty seventh entry
ive even tried to be complementary
I introduced people to this site
and even they get cherry picked on there ninth
I know there is some editing to do
but ive tried so hard to get noticed too
I write about my past, present and future
in my own home or on an adventure
I wont give up until im cherry picked
and my words have been clicked
upon your memory, within your speech
I then become beyond your reach.

Certificate U
Poem
Humour

Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Mrskatehowell. I love this and it really made me laugh out loud (and I'm a miserable bastard!). Let me be the first to say this......... Congratulations on the cherries Kate. Well done - bloody brilliant!

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
And congrats on getting married 3 days ago! Well done all round x Linda

Linda

Submitted by scratch on
Well bloody hell! Congratulations from me too Mrs, I'm chuffed for you!

 

Submitted by Jessiibear on
Well done with this! What a coincidence, eh? It flows so well, also. This is amazing. Lol.

Jess

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
Hey Scratch - you're not such a miserable bastard after all! Linda

Linda

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
Congrats on getting a cherry :)

Mark Heathcote

Submitted by the unfolding head on
well you got it! :)

ddf

Submitted by jolono on
Well done on the cherries! Well done on the wedding even more so!

 

Submitted by misskelizabeth on
Thank-you everyone. wedding was remarkable and i do try haha! scratch your amazing really ;)

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new mrskatehowell Enjoyed and had a laugh! too. so much truth to this. You got your cherries! Well done. Congratulations too! cavalcaderl julie

Submitted by Indrani Ananda on
Indrani Ananda I've written a poem like this, and if I go much longer with a dearth of cherries I'm going to post it. But you've beaten me to it - and congratulations on your ability to wring some fruit out of them at last! I hope you get many more, indeed I hope you amass a complete orchard of the red pests with very little effort at all, let's say "automatically"? There seems to be some semblance that this is indeed possible on here due to the subjective nature of poetic appeal. Indrani.

Indrani Ananda

Submitted by steve_elliott04 on
I love the fact that cherries were awarded here! Brilliant!! It's all been said, but I love the flow of this piece. This is one poem that every abctaler can relate to from the word go. Cheers, Steve.

Submitted by Sooz006 on
harder then I thought... than I thought my madest imagination... maddest a puzzle peices creation... piecing creation? it's like puzzle pieces, creation? ive written with my madest imagination... I (when relating to first person) always has a capital letter. picked on there ninth... their I wont give up until im cherry picked... this is my favourtie line in the poem. Good, I hope you don't give up. Keep going and you'll get there. I've been writing for a few years now and when I started I was terrible, far, far worse than any of yours. Keep going, learn, read other people, improve with each piece and I promise, you'll get there.

 

Submitted by Pat D on
I'll have to try harder I see ha ha ha

Submitted by misskelizabeth on
If you get another cherry pick I shall not be happy PATRICK. HAHA!