Shake

By cabruce

Thu, 01 Nov 2012
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There's blood on my hands
And a hamming in my head
There's blood on my hands
And I don't know where I am
There's blood on my hands
And I think it could be mine
There's blood on my hands
And they uncontrollably shake
There is blood on my hands
And it can't be washed away

Certificate U
Poem
Horror

Comments

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A good horror poem. love the strong suspenseful beat

 

Submitted by denni1 on
You are clever ..

Submitted by BlackInk on
A very emotional piece of art. I can tell the feeling you experienced through this piece, and can also relate. It's very intense and articulately written. The flow is very well done. The only criticism I can say is, I wish it was longer. I enjoyed this very much. Nice job. c: -Cole

-Cole