I Toil Over Words
By cabruce
Wed, 31 Oct 2012
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I toil over words
On pages of old books
Looking for the answers
Of the long asked questions
To hold off advancers
I toil over words
In newspapers and lines
Trying to find good news
In such hard, trying times
But never get passed views
Opposing opinions
I toil over words
Of passing and people
Listening for sad cries
Beneath convincing smiles
I try to pass the lies
I toil over words
That flow from my old pen
Looking for some meaning
In all the work I’ve done
For something redeeming
Before my life has run
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i get the feeling that
i get the feeling that you're depressed and when I reached your old pen I nearly cried. :
very nicely emotional reaction.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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i loved the repeating lines
i loved the repeating lines and the heartfelt nature of this piece - alvin
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