shooting star
By aislinn22h
Sun, 18 Nov 2012
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Starlight trails across a night sky
A flash of hope, a young girls dream
She makes her wish, crossed fingers, closed eyes
A gift from angels it doth seem
A light which throws peace into the hearts of lovers
A scene of beauty, mystery
Soulful warmth sent forth from its glow
Like the flesh of a babe resting upon his mother's
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The stunted ending threw me
The stunted ending threw me but I kind of like it... every reader is going to say, 'Mother's what?' knowing full well what. Nice one.
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