THE WIND WILL NEVER TELL
By moonphish
Sun, 09 Dec 2012
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a mouth that whispers in an ear
may think that no one else will hear
but echos in that canyon never cease
but raise your voice without a fear
while shouting at a lunar sphere
i promise you the moon will keep the peace
for words do not lay down to rest
its far off journeys, they like best
to think this is a lie is quite absurd
for folks must get things off their chest
but if you tell the sky, you're blessed
i promise you the stars won't say a word
a secret, told, is always lost
if human ears it does accost
it starts reverberating like a bell
but never does that line get crossed
if up into the air, its tossed
i promise you the wind will never tell
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I like the structure of this
I like the structure of this one Alvin, it works so well. And as always great rhyming.
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This poem makes me want to
This poem makes me want to be an innocent child again.
Loved it.
;)Pia
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An interesting comment, plus
An interesting comment, plus nice structure again. Rhiannon
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Great poem alvin with your
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Great poem alvin with your own magical touch.
Jenny.
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