Scurrying home on a Winter here
By paborama
Mon, 21 Jan 2013
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Grey strokes the winding snow
Against the window fearless blow
Trenchant, tearing, cradling, dying
Reborn in gusts and strident gale
Who knows how will end the tale
Drenched, torn, dying
Silent grows the night too soon
A locked and bolted door my boon
The fire newly sighing
A duvet keeps those fears away
And stands the wolves of night at bay
My frosty hands vying
For the warmth of you, the heat of us
The bowl of soup and a hearty crust
The night no longer prying
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I really liked the flow of
I really liked the flow of this paborama. Last verse made it feel like a poem full of love.
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It flows wonderfully,
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It flows wonderfully, Paborama. Sometimes you can over-edit, so maybe you should leave it as it is.
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