Blackbird Song
By well-wisher
Mon, 25 Feb 2013
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Blackbird, all the notes you use
weave whirling, twirling curlicues;
notes like little birds that fly
through ear and heart like air and sky.
On a blackboard, in bright chalks,
I’d try to draw the words you talk
as fireworks and flower stems
with rose petals and flames on them.
Blackbird, your trills fill my head
like fancy frills and golden thread.
It’s little wonder you adorn,
with your bright song, each spring time morn.
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twirling curlicues...love
twirling curlicues...love this combo, WW.
Perhaps cut like little birds form L3...similes ergghhh! And time morn from the finale.
Can't help but comment on anything with Blackbird in it ... blame Katie Noonan lol
Keep at it.
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Brilliant. Heard this on You
Brilliant. Heard this on You tube and wanted so much to read it! Rich visual way to describe song. One of my favourite poems by anyone
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