'I walk where sea-dogs run'
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By OKSauce
Fri, 12 Apr 2013
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I walk where sea-dogs run,
spray-booted on the long winter sand,
eager as seagulls,
jumping for fictional minnows,
and snapping at the blanketed sun.
Old men cough sea-salt
and click their fingers in time
with jogging men who weep
at strange, sad footprints.
Steel factories, a sky away,
greyly suck the hanging clouds
and stunt the mountain’s green
and loveless boughs above the bay.
And with narrow seaweed eyes,
I cast wet words
in the hope of catching bigger fish.
But forever on this clammy sand,
my small words die.
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I just love this. The
I just love this. The beach/sea metaphor for an artist's struggle works seamlessly. Can't wait to read more of your work.
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A big warm welcome Oksauce.
A big warm welcome Oksauce. I thought this was great.
Some lines ina poem just stick with you.
Steel factories, a sky away,
greyly suck the hanging clouds
and stunt the mountain’s green
Did it for me mate.
You almost had me singing Jerusalem!
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A powerful piece, OKSauce,
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A powerful piece, OKSauce, well-earned cherries. And welcome to the site.
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That's a damn fine pome. I
That's a damn fine pome. I really like it very much.
Is Lon Pobty still a bastard?
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beautiful piece here...i
beautiful piece here...i added you to my `follow` list :) - alvin
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