No Happy Returns...
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By Silver Spun Sand
Fri, 31 May 2013
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8 comments
A steady drizzle
as she opens the gate...
smoke from a bonfire
across the road,
hangs low.
Picks her way
through the small,
white graves;
her stilettos sink
in rain sodden turf.
Fumbles in the pocket
of her coat – takes out
a tiny parcel, wrapped
in pink tissue...
tied with silver ribbon – quivers
in the breeze.
No happy returns
no cards, no party
no singing today;
a nosegay of bluebells
says it all, as she turns...
walks away.
The trees sway;
amidst the leaves,
the moist tongues
of feathered missives
do their best
to fill the void –
that interminable silence
follows the ceasing
of the tolling
of a bell.
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A heart-rending piece, Tina,
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
A heart-rending piece, Tina, perfect combination of the sadness of the situation and the beautiful imagery of the surroundings.
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Hello Tina, Yes, indeed, a
Hello Tina,
Yes, indeed, a lovely poem and very atmospheric. The repetition of pocket in the third stanza jarred with me a little as your unrivalled skill with language raises my expectations probably unreasonably so.
Still a beautiful poem that such a little thing could not spoil.
Moya
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Agreed with Walrus' comment,
Agreed with Walrus' comment, Tina. I found the last stanza very apposite. I suppose the couple of little stanzas before it picturing too the gentle attempts of others to help at that stage of bereavement. Rhiannon
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You've brought together so
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
You've brought together so many different emotions
in this poem Tina. I also found it quite haunting,
almost as if you were speaking of a spirit.
Perhaps I have it wrong, but that was my interpretation.
As always a wonderful poem, which I very much
enjoyed.
Jenny.
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