Diving
By well-wisher
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This is a diving board.
Dive
tluasremoS
and SpLaSh
deep
below
the surface
of the blue green ocean;
shattering reflections of the sun; rds
blowing bubbles that float upwa
as
you
dive
deeper;
racing with wild seahorses
through deep sea canyons;
weaving through waving sea grass meadows
and tangled groves of kelp and algae;
chasing after frilly skirted jellyfish
and being chased by a long limbed octopus;
flapping and swooping and soaring with rays;
being tickled by featherstars and prickled by urchins;
gazing upon swirling galaxies of starfish
and swimming midst the notes of humpback sonatas
before heading back up
and dragging your dripping
mind back onto this page,
these words whirling in your memory
like seashells in your hand.
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Comments
Wow! you really feel carried
Wow! you really feel carried round whirling through the wonders underwater in this. I think children would enjoy the pace too. Rh
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I adore concrete poetry. This
I adore concrete poetry. This is a sensory treat with unusual marine images and a delicious sense of language drench.
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