Slayer - Finale
By grover
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Reckon it was like the sound of thunder when our swords struck. Ain’t never been one for fancy words, but I could see beauty in our deadly dance. Metal has a sound that sings shrilly through the nights and days. To my ears it is the most harmonious thing I ever heard. As I stared through the sweat and effort at Cleaver, I could see he was lost in the music just like me.
“Come on, Little Slayer,” Cleaver teased, “I know you have more to give than this.”
With a sudden ferocity, I came at Cleaver with strike upon strike. Each attack was deflected with ease and I could feel his entire strength behind his sword. Falling back, I regained my breath, frustrated I could see no way through his flashing blade. It was like the man had two swords! “I don’t want to hurt you,” I panted.
Cleaver grunted, then rushed me with a slashing cut to my throat that I brushed aside, pushing Cleaver off balance. He spun round before I could get my final strike in and blocked. “One of us dies here this day,” Cleaver said, breathlessly.
Taking three large steps back, I gave myself some room to breathe and study his defense. There was a glint of death in his eyes. I didn’t believe he would actually hurt me. But he did. With a sudden sprint towards me, Cleaver sliced out. This time I was too slow and his blade cut my arm, deep enough to know he was serious. Anger now urged me on as the pain sharpened my senses. I feinted an attack to Cleaver’s right, then came in to his left. Cleaver’s sword cut my attack, but I had drawn blood from a deep cut to his side.
“Can we stop this now?”
Wincing with pain, Cleaver shook his head. “Not until you face the truth.”
I deepened my stance, ready to snap into my next attack. “What truth? The dark lord came and-”
Cleaver’s sword cut through the air and I dodged it, jumping back. “There was no dark lord!”
There was a sudden flash of memory. The dark lord dressed in black towered above me as my village burned. Shaking the thought from my head, I threw attack after attack at Cleaver who I could see tiring. The old man was skillful, but he lacked the stamina that my youth gave me. If I could not cut him down, I would wear him down.
“A plague swept the land,” Cleaver said, clutching the bloody wound at his side. “Entire villages were burnt to prevent the spread. They called it the Blight.”
Cleaver’s words dug into me, sharper than his sword had. “The dark lord-”
“You made him up!” Cleaver attacked again, feinting a head attack, then striking at my legs. Jumping back, I lost my footing and stumbled. “It was a plague that spread through your village bringing death, no dark lord. I helped burn it down!”
Angry, I went into another frenzy of hacks and slashes. Cleaver’s arms were shaking as he held his sword to my blows, but he was soon on his knees. With a final blow, I knocked the old man’s sword from his hands. “You burned my village?”
Cleaver looked into my eyes as I held my sword to his throat. “There was nothing but plague ridden bodies; I thought you were all dead.”
Holding my voice as steady as I could, I asked, “Why did you let me believe it was a dark lord all these years?”
Cleaver sighed. “You needed something to believe in, to grow strong and focus your rage at. Now it’s gone, Little Slayer. There is just us.” He dropped his eyes from me. “And now one of us must die.”
I brought my sword up high, ready to swipe down and cut my master down. The last of the sun’s rays washed over me and I felt the warmth of the day fading fast. Slowly, I brought my sword down. My mind was back on that distant day at Dragon’s Spit as I saw my parents sick and dying. Unable to help them, I lay down next to my Ma as flames spread through the village. My eyes tightly closed, I imagined a dark figure hunting everyone down. Wasn’t quite sure what was happening to me as I stood with Cleaver’s life in my hands; reckoned I was dying, ‘coz I fell to the ground and everything went black.
“Come back, Little Slayer,” Cleaver whispered.
I opened my eyes and stared up into the rough old face of Cleaver. “Did I die?”
“Aye, but now you get to live again.”
I sat up, throwing my arms around Cleaver. I kissed him, expecting he would pull back again. Only he didn’t. Finally, I pulled away, gasping, but happy. “So you do love me?”
Cleaver smiled for the first time in... forever. “Aye,” he whispered, pulling me to my feet. No other words were needed from him.
“Was all that training for nothing?” My head was spinning. “There is no dark lord to face.”
Cleaver shook his head. “There are always dark lords to face and people to be protected from them. I have given you the tools, shaped your body and mind. You are ready to go out into the world and live.”
Suddenly I saw many paths before me that had been hidden before. Cleaver’s clearing seemed like a small place and I was struggling to breathe there. He was right, I realised: it was time to move on and explore the land. Even though it was a Blight that killed my Ma and Pa, I would still find and fight any dark lords I came across. From the smallest village to the largest kingdom, there was the weak that needed to be protected from evil.
“Come with me,” I said to Cleaver.
Cleaver shook his head. “No, my story was done a long time ago. Let me fade to legend while you write a new one.”
I kissed Cleaver. “Your legend shall live on through me.” As the sun faded, we went to his hut and closed a chapter on my life.
The End
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A nice simple story with
A nice simple story with relatable characters and even a twist. I like to think that Slayer made up the Dark Lord becuase of the horrors she saw during the Blight, people killing each other out of desperation: trying not to get infected. Like she couldn't handle the evil that normal men could do so she embodied it in a malevonant being. Sad that this is the final one, I'll look up for of your stuff, but it would have been nice if this one had carried on. I often find that heroes are most entertaining during their early nomad years, when they're not tied to anything.
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Really enjoyed this Kevin, a
Really enjoyed this Kevin, a great twist, I didn't see it coming. Let me know when you post next. Rachel
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Sounds good to me, can't beat
Sounds good to me, can't beat a good bit of horror, I am going through my writers block phase :o/
Will read it in my lunch break! R
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You seem to post a lot though
You seem to post a lot though Kevin? It's frustrating isnt it, I'm trying to come up with 1700 words for the writers online ghost comp. one week to go and nothing, the harder I try the worse it gets! Tried to cut 'I am Here' down but it didn't work so now trying to expand that to novel length. Same as you with that though, I always stall at the 20,000 word mark. Good luck with the SciFi comp, could you use one you have posted? R
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Ooo lovely thank you, I will
Ooo lovely thank you, I will save it for my lunch break.
I have managed to do a 1700 word version of I am Here but I just don't like it, it feels like it wants to be longer not shorter - I know that sounds mad..
The problem with planning it out is I find I lose the pace. I type like a banshee for the first couple of thousand words and then when it comes to filling in the bits and moving the story forward I get bored with it and it sounds flat if that makes sense. As you said before though we're not getting paid it and its supposed to be fun so I'm trying to stop thinking too much about it and just get on with it :o) R
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Hey grover,
Hey grover,
You seem to be really good at starting novels! I read through the comments about how you stall at around 20/25k and have a suggestion. This is a great foundation for a series of adventures. What if instead of trying to plan out a huge novel, get an idea for roughly how you want to end. You might think of a scene or an event. Then instead of having 50k to plan out, write a short adventure for Slayer of about 10k. Do a few of these, growing your character and then all of a sudden you’ve got your book! This would work for your maze stories as well. Give them an adventure in a valley, new people, new issues, and then move on to a new valley.
Another thing to note is I never plan out my novels. I only ever have an idea of how I want to end the book. The rest I just write and see where it goes. I may or may not get to the end I had envisioned, but I will get fairly close.
You’re setting up terrific starts to these. It would be a shame if you never got any further.
Lisa
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