When I Was Very Small
By Silver Spun Sand
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We stood in the cleft of the hill...
straining our eyes watching
Orion ride – sure and shimmering
over the ridge, and you opened
your coat...took me inside to a world
of tractor oil, Erinmore flake,
peat smouldering on a bonfire;
the raw heat of you keeping me
from the cold...
the night – streaked with silver
that fell from a blackberry sky
to fill the Devil’s Punchbowl.
Quivering stars, crowded together
in the wavering air, as Jack Frost wove
peignoirs of ice on brown-frowning
corduroy fields.
And in these warm, balmy days
of a lingering September,
I remember those nights, those
skies – a creed, a pact, a song
written by those same stars
you first translated for me when
I was very small; ‘To bud,
to blossom, to blaze. To know
when to shine, and when
to fall'.
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Some wonderful descriptions
Some wonderful descriptions in this poem Tina...love the second stanza, you describe such a wonderful sky. Very much enjoyed. Jenny.
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beautiful translation of the
beautiful translation of the past into the present.
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That's a beautiful piece of
That's a beautiful piece of poetic writing Tina. Absolutely superb. 'Brown corduroy fields" is such a well chosen image.
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This week I saw a plough wait
This week I saw a plough wait for a combined harvester to leave a field with the last load of barley. As soon as the harvester was clear the stubble got ploughed back in. The only way that it it possible to wring crops from land farmed at that intensity is to rely on fertiliser derived from the petro-chemical industry. Something's not quite right Tina.
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