Dingle Dell 2, Home again

By The royster

Wed, 16 Oct 2013
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Welcome home Elfroy they cried

Elorien standing by my side

I looked into her eyes so bright

A tiny tear fell out of sight

 

A welcome like I’d never known

A home at last to call my own

A life I’d somehow left behind

What made me leave, was I so blind.

 

Now I’m back where I belong

A place of beauty, Love and song

Elorien’s love she couldn’t hide

She was to be my Elven bride

 

Such happiness she bought to me

The two of us and becoming three

The love we share will never die

Just tears of happiness we cry.

 

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I came here often as you know

Watched  birds and Bees, and flowers grow

This special place that all along

Held my life within a song

                                                                                                                                                                                          

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Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

I like it! We all have the happy-ever-after Dell of Elfland in our hearts and you have written a poem that gets there.   Elsie

Submitted by The royster on

Thank you so much Elsie. I'm glad to have made your heart happy. I believe that's what we all strive to do with our poems. I assume you had read the first part also.  Bless you and thank you for looking in.  Roy

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Hi Roy and Elf family!  A really sweet follow up to your part 1.  This also has such a lovely song-like flow.  Love it!

Linda

Submitted by The royster on

Greetings from the Little People.  Thank you Linda, so much.   I have been invited to read a couple of my poems at an open mic evening at Wisbech Library in November.  Should be fun.  Roy

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

This is sweet. There's an innocence you don't find often.

 

Submitted by The royster on

Thank you very much Vera. Appreciate you're looking in. Innocence is bliss! Only lasts a few years though doesn't it.  Must look for more.  Roy

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

That's brilliant mate.  Hope you enjoy it!

Linda

Submitted by The royster on

Thanks Linda.  I just have to chose which 3 to take.  Looking forward to the experience.  See what you've gotten me into, lol.   Roy 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

There's such a romantic...magical feel to this poem Roy.  Definitely captured my imagination.  Good luck with the reading,  it sounds like fun.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by The royster on

Thak you so much Jenny.  After the first part I felt it wasn't quite finished, so I really appreciate your kind comments.  I shall try to capture again.  Roy