A Momentary Lapse of Reason

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 28 Oct 2013
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3 comments
 

Touch

my soul

make me

whole,

 

drifts

the Sun

to trip

upon;

 

beyond

colours...

dark clouds

burst fourth;

 

between

each spellbound

space...drips

crystal fluid colours,

 

journey

now...

let moments

free me;

 

for

the light

could be gone

in a fleeting glance,

 

falling

through gaps

no end to

the dive...

 

as

bottomless chaos

catches sight

of my

silhouette,

 

then...

breaking touch

with imagined

rainbows;

 

sliding

down gathering speed,

filtering all sounds

but my heartbeat...

 

touching

vibrant radiance –

catching breath in

a moment's tear,

 

sudden

clearing, receive

me now...let me escape

through your narrow opening...

 

 

drops

of dew settle,

I feel

their moist kisses,

 

though

I'm not aware;

of who I am...

or how I got here,

 

just

the excitement

of being...

In a Momentary Lapse of Reason.

 

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Bear,  your thoughts were exactly right.  I wrote this poem while listening to Pink Floyd and some other psychedelic music,  with note pad and pen.  The words just came in a flow.  Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed and for reading.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

Hi Jenny,

Great Trip  wink and one played to good music!

Nice one... good to see you experimenting with your style and flow

Cheers for sharing... take care

Rob

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi there Rob,  glad you were able to understand where I was coming from with this poem.  Sometime it's good to just let the words take you where they want and not worry about precision...well for me anyway.  Thank you so much for your time and comment,  it's always nice to recieve.  smiley  Big smiles from me.  Jenny.