Never Enough Time, Dear.

Cherry

By prettyrose

Thu, 07 Nov 2013
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12 comments
 

'ooooo ahh,Dave stop you've

Caught my hair' thats all I heard,

Whilst I tried to

Turn.

 

Sorry Elsie my dear, I heard a

Crack, oh this blinking

Antiquated back.

 

'Poor gentle giant of mine,

Not to worry, atleast we tried'.

 

 

My little 5ft nothing, fire cracker

Said, its times like this, when I

Know i'm blessed. for after

Twenty five years, we still

Make an effort to have our

Adult  quality time,and if

Things go wrong, which lets

Face it, at my age they often do,

We can still have a chuckle about

This bit of a do.

 

'Hang on love,I will try and slowly

Move up towards you'.

 

'Ok Petal, sorry  for getting us in this mess.'

Bless her perfect soul, For being patient,

and  not having a moan or groan.

 

 

' Oh Blimey Dave, I know were in

A bit of a pickle, but i'v just

Remembered, we invited

Vicar Jonson and Mrs Lee

For afternoon Tea.

 

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Adult Love :) Stories/Poems
Humour

Comments

Submitted by scratch on

surpriseHilarious Prettyrose.  Great to see the old folk have still got the spice of life about them.  I hope that the vicar didn't come early!

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyAww thank you Scratch, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and enjoy it !!! And no the Vicar was late wink.

 

Really made me smile your comments, thank you again Scratch!!

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by VeraClark on

Really sweet and the gentle humour made me smile.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Vera, I hope your well.

 

Thank you for taking the time to read and give your lovely comment on my work, I really appreciate that. And I if it always made you smile, which I hoped it would readers, then great.

 

 

 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Bee on

This made me smile.

Bee

Submitted by celticman on

more tea Vicar?

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Bee, I hope your well.

Thank you so much for reading and comment, it really is appreciated!

 

Thats good, I was aiming for a smile for readers and thats great if achieved.

 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by prettyrose on

yes lol always celticman, tea rather than coffeeeeeee lol.

 

 

Thanks for reading my work, its appreicated, and I hope you liked it.

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by KateReamer on

I fell off my bed laughing. Ofc, it might have been all the chocolate, but I think it was your poem too.

Kate 

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

NIce lively poem, I can visualise the big man and the little lady and their love and endearments        Elsie

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Kate, you made me smile with your comment and Im pretty sure it was the chocklate, with all the endorphins they have in them lol.

 

I have a picnic while I type lol. But thank you for your lovely comment and taking the time to read my poem, I am glad it made you laugh.

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyhI Elsie,

Sorry for not replying sooner, but these days even working on my laptop seems to be a hugh task in it's self.

 

Thank you so much for you lovely comment and for reading my work, I really appreciate it and glad you were able to imagine the scene.

 

take care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx