Castles in Spain
By Silver Spun Sand
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How like a ruin overgrown
with flowers that hide the rents of time
stands now the past that I have known,
Castles in Spain, not built of stone
but of white summer cloud, and blown
into this little mist of rhyme.
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Unaware that winter’s morning
would be the last one they would share,
he’d brushed her hair; aflame –
like a Granada sunset...
watched her walk toward the door,
steadying herself on the bed and table
as she went. For a timeless moment
she’d stood there...
frail, fragile...as if a breath of wind
might waft her away. Outside the window
winter jasmine clambered, in all its whiteness
to be seen amongst the darkling scrim.
Later that day, she’d asked for her bed
to be turned to face the garden,
as her spirit, parched of light, sought
its solace, gathering the darkness,
like wine, in a bowl to sup.
Sated, out of that room it soared...way above
the ridge with its shawl of pines, and flock
of errant sheep; her eyes morphing, through blue,
through silver-grey, like a frozen lake
and as winter melted into spring, even higher
than the clouds it rose, warming a shoal
of dormant fish, back to life.
Unaware, that winter’s morning
would be the last one they would share,
he’d brushed her hair; aflame –
like a Granada sunrise...
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I couldn't help but feel the
I couldn't help but feel the heartfelt love two people have for each other in this poem, unaware that they would be spending there last moments together in such an intimate way. Makes me realise how much I want to hold on to every moment of happiness I can with my partner.
Having her bed facing the garden, to take in all the natural light, a last request, though without realisation. The Winter Jasmine, such a beautiful sight to see.
A poem that gives the reader food for thought and makes you realise how precious the natural world really is.
Thank you for sharing your inspiring words Tina.
Jenny.
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How quiet and lovely this is.
How quiet and lovely this is. As always, beautiful writing, Tina.
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A dazzling narrative of two
A dazzling narrative of two lover's, last, heartfelt moments. I love the way you meld natural cycles with the degenerating human body. I have one, minor quibble. Isn't "rents" a noun. Do you try and use it as a verb in this context? Maybe, you could say, "flowers that hide the shadow of time".
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In the spirit of Longfellow,
In the spirit of Longfellow, we can all make an allowance.!
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