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By amy451
Tue, 18 Feb 2014
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I once had a dream...
About a land that I had never seen,
I wish that I had been to that wonderful dream,
The grass was not green,
and the mountains, well what a scene
And the sky was not blue,
But I will give you a clue,
the river did not flow,
but it did glow,
the moon was so bright,
it gave me a fright,
so that is the end of my wonderful dream,
that I wish that I has seen.
The end
please comment I would love it if you gave me some more ideas thank you for reading x
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Good effort at the rhyme
Good effort at the rhyme scheme. Well done again Amy.
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