Dingle through the seasons
By Rhiannonw
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We went in the winter, just after the floods*,
we went in the spring when the opening buds
of the trees, arching towers
stood high over surges of sparkling flowers;
and now in high summer, growth rampant is found
in the paths and the fields and the fringes around,
but down in the dingle, which shady trees fill,
apart from the birdsong, and brook, all is still,
with only a little ground cover, and mud –
still wet and quite squelchy in parts, but no flood –
we can walk by the clear, stoney brook, watch its slow
rippling, shallow, meandering flow;
then up the steep side of the gulley, the gallery
path we select for a circling return
(from there, we looked down, when we came here before,
through twigs to the stream and the water-logged floor)
but now full of fronds, that obstruct us, of fern
(hope there’s no ticks!),
and tangles of brambles entwine,
entangle, confine
(why didn’t we carry our weed-hacking sticks!?)
We exit the dingle with wounds of the jungle,
emerging refreshed from this well-hidden glen
to everyday life, and our duties again.
*http://www.abctales.com/story/rhiannonw/holywell-dingle-wet-winter
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I've been waiting for a poem
I've been waiting for a poem like this that takes you rambling through the beauty of nature with a rambling tumble of words like -
'then up the steep side of the gulley, the gallery
path we select for a circling return...'
Lovely poem, Rhiannon.
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Your poetry just gets better
Your poetry just gets better Rhiannon. Thisone has a lovely flowing progression; it carries the reader along with it. 'tangles of brambles entwine entangle confine' is a great use of language, conveying exactly that tangle of weeds. Cherries well merited.
Linda
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Rhiannon - this is quite
Rhiannon - this is quite magical and I, too, enjoyed the ramble. Beautifully written, and more than deserving of its cherries.
Tina
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
When I started reading this, I felt like I had just opened a picture book, and each bit of the poem showed a new picture. It was lovely.
Jean
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