Jonathan’s arrow sign (IP)
By Rhiannonw
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If I shoot long, you must be gone –
the danger is extreme;
if I shoot short, then there is nought
to fear for it would seem
my father’s ire has lost its fire,
he’s quit his murderous scheme.
His jealousy is bitterly
corrupting and corroding,
without God’s calm it brings such harm,
so easily exploding.
It may yet cease, cooled by God’s peace:
I’ll check out with foreboding.
For jealousy’s such tragedy,
much better acquiescing
to God’s good plan and gifts to man
and on that path progressing,
and never slide to foolish pride:
disastrous and distressing.
(1 Samuel 20 esp vv.21,22,36-38)
A heart at peace gives life to the body, but envy rots the bones. Proverbs 14:30
[IP: 12:7:14 The Long Shot]
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The theme is really cleverly
The theme is cleverly worked into this along with the message. Fabulously rhyming, too, which for me keeps the interest and enhances the subject matter.
I enjoyed reading your poem so much, Rhiannon, and I'll have another look at it later.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
Very cleverly done and with a message that comes through clearly.
Jean
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Rhiannon, you got me looking
Rhiannon, you got me looking up a good biblical tale I never knew! Thanks Elsie
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