Haiku

By alphadog1

Sun, 27 Jul 2014
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5 comments
 

Warm soft pepper and pine thrills 
Attracting the doves 
Whom circle and then divide.

Certificate PG
Poem

Comments

Submitted by celticman on

nice and divisive.

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on

thanks a lot. If you haave any work you would like me to read, I would be grateful. 

 

Submitted by celticman on

thanks mate, there's lot of stuff to be read, edited, annotated.

 

Submitted by alphadog1 on

If you could just poiunt me in the right direction. I would be grateful. Otherwise I will be going over work that -perhaps- you are happier with.  Its up to you.  But II'll be over to your page and have a look at some tomorrow morning. Its been a rough day here and my brain is not functioning well.  Also I have a first draft short that needs working through myself. If I forget, and that is possible with the kids home, just remind me. I don't mind and I will have a look. 

 

Submitted by celticman on

kids come first. then your own work. Then, later, when you've time, other's work. cheers.