Twitter Challenge:

By Shannan

Sun, 14 Sep 2014

4 comments

You didn't kiss my lips
You gripped my soul
A tightening knot
I stood breathless
Pulsating with love & fear
Frozen

Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Sun, 2014-09-14 15:51

i like this one best of the three, but maybe change 'bursting'.

Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Wed, 2014-09-17 09:59

What do you reckon would work better... reverberating? Harnessing? pulsating? ... so many options... anything else maybe??

Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Wed, 2014-09-17 22:25

I like pulsating with, like a heart.

Permalink Submitted by Shannan on Sun, 2014-09-21 15:16

... let's make that happen then :-) {it won't fit into Twitter now though, too many characters}