By the Light of a Gibbous Moon
By Ewan
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Beside the silent water,
the forest's ravelin
of cernuous willows
admires its reflection,
silvered by the gibbous moon.
The dark between the trees
hides witches,wolves
and weirdward things,
and any bird that dares to sing
is shouted down by raucous crows.
The undergrowth whispers secret names
of children lost to childhood's games.
The smoke from the chimney
of the house in the woods,
redoles of innocents'
riding hoods.
Here is the church,
here is the steeple,
let's bar the doors
to frightened people.
Beneath the brackish water,
the young of Hamelin
take desperate swallows,
expire in reflections
illumined by the gibbous moon.
Footnote:
'redoles' is a neologism, or a re-found word, extrapolated from the archaic 'redoling'
(OED)
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I'm glad for the footnote. I
I'm glad for the footnote. I think you'll need footnotes for cernous (drooping, as a floower?) and ravelin (a triangular fortification). All those big words make me small, but hey aren't we all. Nice one. Poem of the week. Well deserved.
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Wonderfully frightening.
Wonderfully frightening.
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Beautifully written.
I enjoyed this poem immensely, and you described this time of year in such a beautiful, creepy, fun way. I am in awe. Congrats on poem of the week!
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Loved the uncanny in this.
Loved the uncanny in this. Spooked and excited me with child-like pleasure, like the Grimms and Hamelin. Liked this so very much I will cut it out and keep.
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Excellent word choices here
Excellent word choices here and the whole things flows so smoothly.
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