A Chance To Live (IP)
By well-wisher
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The ghost, he tried to grip the rose;
he said, “I love how red it glows.
I’d love to smell its scent again;
to touch it just like other men”.
And then he tried to feel the sun,
through its warm rays, his fingers, run,
“Oh bless this poor man with your gold”,
he begged but all he felt was cold.
He tried to touch a young girl’s face
but all he felt was empty space
and though he whispered in her ear
a silence was all she could hear.
“Oh god”, he said, “Why did I waste
the chance to touch, to smell, to taste;
to enjoy all life blessed me with.
Oh, for another chance to live”.
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Simply Brilliant :)
Hi Well-wisher,
I hope your ok.Loved this poem from first word to last.it's got a springy, rhyming feeling with a good message to give and well worth the cherries.
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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I loved the emotion the came
I loved the emotion the came through this poem and the point of view made it all the more interesting. Great Job!
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