Hurricane Katia’s tail-edge
By Rhiannonw
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(Llŷn peninsula, north-west Wales, September12&13)
Lashing, dying hurricane tail,
bashing, pushing, gusty gale:
whirling map-bag – whipping, slapping;
wrenching hat to make it rocket,
– swift uncapping –
safe in pocket.
Cliff-path aerial view
of heaving ocean, swelling, welling,
billows surging, restless, vast,
clashing spray plumes hurled with blast
on battered jagged rock-spikes cast;
wide-spread ‘horses’ rising, rearing,
– white manes flying, flecks bedecking.
Crashing, rushing waves on bays of sand,
surfers drifting in to land,
back again for riding, sliding,
dipping, slipping under,
– wind reviving glowing vigour.
September 14 Softened winds, a rippled ocean,
tranquil floor of turquoise-green,
or steely-grey, with sunlight bands of glittering gleam,
and cloud-shaped shadows here and there,
wild ‘white-horses’ drowned or sunk below,
to where
potential turbulence hugged, asleep,
down in depths of fathoms deep.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
What a storm you were in. It is raining hard and blowing here at the moment too - but nothing like you describe. If you live by the sea, I expect you see a lot of very fascinating and frightening weather.
Jean
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This was such descriptive and
This was such descriptive and wild piece of writing Rhiannon. I could just imagine those huge waves, or should I say white horses. ha ha! Love the image of waves crashing against rocks in a storm, though wouldn't want to be out in such weather. You summed up the conditions well.
Jenny.
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