3. The Plot
By chant
Sun, 07 Dec 2014
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Discreet blue flowers border
his garden. In the bosky dark
he spades. Effortlessly the clods
fly & with white hands he pats
the trench walls. Next door’s lights
go on. Those Chinese brothers
no doubt dialling the street.
When the latch to the rear door
clicks, their mother emerges,
trowel in hand, a sham gardener,
her wan face soaring the fence
like a moon. Tonight, perhaps?
@ianjmclachlan
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I'm really enjoying this
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I'm really enjoying this series Chant - thank you!
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night gardening, lovely,
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
night gardening, lovely, spooky and intriguing.
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last line perhaps cut
last line perhaps cut "perhaps" to end on "Tonight?" another good one, the level of your narrative sustained, the poeminteresting.
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