Dear Daughter,Second Part To Dear Mom

By prettyrose

Sun, 15 Mar 2015
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I may not be there to hold your,
hand when things get tough,
Or laugh when the kids play in
The mud.

But I'm in your pictures,thoughts,
Heart, so always near,and will
Never disappear!!!

Just remember,when you cry
I'm on the tissue you use to
Wipe away your tears,
Or when the sun comes out
I'm smiling at you.

That sudden breeze upon your
Shoulder while you wait to cross
The road,its me telling you
I'm here sending you hugs from heaven.

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Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

What a nice idea to have the response to the first.

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Philip,

I hope your well. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work,and to give such lovely comments means alot.I should of put the poems vice versa I think on here lol, but hopefully people have read 'dear mom' first, its been one of those weeks ha.

 

Take Care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

A lovely poem to complement the first, Trish. Really sweet.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Luigi :) I hope your well, Great hearing from you, and such a compliment from such a great writer like you,as made my tough week, so much better.Thank you so much.

 

Take Care

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Bee on

No, I'm still in tears. I think when you have had such a loving relationship, they are always with you. Your second poem is just perfect, Trish.

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Bee,

I hope your well. only joking on the subject line :).thank you for reading and commenting,which is always welcomed and so appreciated.yes

Take Care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by torscot on

A sad  reflective tale for mothers day.

torscot

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Torscot, I hope your well. Yes I agree and I actually have a lovely happy one, as my nature is happiness and cheering up people,however why its great mothers who are thankfully still with us,get spoilt,as they should.Not all of us are lucky to have that special privilege any more,and I did that for those ones and their moms.

Hope that makes sense.Thank you for reading.

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx