Long Night's Journey into Day
By Silver Spun Sand
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They seem to be there so
They seem to be there so suddenly don't they? Today, we passed a windblown verge in the countryside and were surprised to see masses of white violets there, and a little further again quite a big patch, and I think one violet one! They were shivering, but very pretty, and good to see them out.
I do like the contrariness of a holly hedge! Rhiannon
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That's so beautiful, Tina!
That's so beautiful, Tina! Winter dressing the fashion clothes of spring, the night resetting the time for the next sunrise... and for ending, a complete ambiental rehabilitation, hideous, but promising. In fact I don't remember at the moment a better nature metamorphosys crafted with words.
Powerful words, Tina!
Tibi
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I think, for this time, you
I think, for this time, you did it again
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I can't find any! There's
I can't find any! There's something so visual and blooming birthy about your words here, Tina. And yes, a resurrection of a kind is perfect.
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What a wonderful poem Tina..
What a wonderful poem Tina...just love everything about this writing.
I like the way you describe the Oak tree with its arthritic limbs creaking, also that second stanza just blew me away.
Absolutely heavenly to read and one of my favourites of yours.
Jenny.
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This one blew me away - the
This one blew me away - the phonology of it is stunning. I love the last line of the first stanza, but it's all good - and there's so much meaning to be had or explored too - you should be extra delighted with this one.
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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So very beautiful.
So very beautiful.
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