Childline
By lenchenelf
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Bombs fall fast with a telltale whine,
closed, my mouth cannot speak
in their presence.
Cannot speak to my neighbours
cannot form words of truth in this hide.
Scramble our sacks of luck
to our backs and walk, walk,
walk through dust of past;
destruction.
Trees, shade, water, hope:
sculpted landscape
hands of ancients,
shaped all
memory, memory......
Blast,
rubble and gone.
Fatherland, Motherland, you betrayed us
we seek another land beyond a sea
that may claim us,
before usurers cut
of the waves.
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father and mother, lands of
father and mother, lands of another, perhaps you see the way we want, or could be, if given another chance to be free?
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You do convey a range of
You do convey a range of perspectives - clever and effective. I wonder if you want 'off' the waves rather than 'of'?
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Found this effective. maybe
Found this effective. maybe especially the last 2 lines, but did find them difficult to connect - saw it as the cut of the usurers, and the cut of the waves. Rhiannon
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Ah, cut as in share of the
Ah, cut as in share of the waves. Thanks for showing me that.
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