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By denni1

Sat, 09 May 2015
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7 comments
 

A message pings through
It's another from you
Usual (groan) 'how. Was you're day!!'
The way you text speak
Makes me feel weak
But not in a sexual way

Bad grammar, can't spell
Is something l dwell on
A turn-off, disaster for you who
writes to seem bright
Emotionally wound tight
Punctuating yourself from a screw

'hay.denise? watching question time'

Stimulate me, with a capital 'D'

Certificate 18
Poem

Comments

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Haha, beyond the language of texting, plain poor grammar is a turn off. smiley

Submitted by denni1 on

Thought it was just me. Thanks for the read and comment xx

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Denni. This is so funny! You cheered me up!

Bee

Submitted by love_writing on

Brilliant - Stimulate me with a capital 'D'. Loved this :)

love_writing

Submitted by denni1 on

Aint't it the truth xx cheers !

Submitted by london_calling79 on

YES! I loved this. It's horribly judgemental but I couldn't ever be stimulated by someone with bad grammar!

 

Submitted by denni1 on

Oh, thanks l_c79. Is it judgemental? Guess so, but we like what we like! Dx